Doctora Creativa
Arianne Benedetti | Screenwriter & Script Doctor
I protect your investment. I identify why your script isn't working and hand you the exact tools — or the direct rewrite — to fix it, elevate it and get it market-ready.
- Clinical diagnosis
- Active rewriting
- Page-one writing
Strict NDA · Detailed written delivery · Direct conversation
- Secure payment
- Visa · MC · Apple Pay
- Strict NDA
- 1:1 session included
🎬 NDA estricto
Featured projects: 'Más que hermanos', 'Despierta Mamá', 'Laffit Pincay', 'Rojo', 'Try Wolf'
A stuck script is lost time and money
If you've read your screenplay so many times you can no longer feel its pulse — if something is off in act two, if the protagonist isn't landing, if the producer says 'something doesn't work' but no one can name it — you don't need another opinion. You need a clinical diagnosis.
Premise without traction
The hook reads great on the pitch deck but flattens on the page.
Second-act collapse
Strong setup, strong climax — and a wandering, low-stakes middle.
Protagonist without spine
Likable but passive. Things happen to them; they don't drive the story.
Not another reader. A clinician.
Diagnose before prescribing
Most notes hand you opinions. A Script Doctor identifies the structural fault — premise, structure, rhythm, character — and pinpoints the exact scene where it begins.
A solution for every problem
Every diagnosis comes with three creative paths to fix it. If I say 'act two is flat,' you'll receive three concrete options to rebuild it.
Objectivity, no ego
My goal is not to write the movie I want. It's to make your original vision land on the page and resonate with the market.
Scripts that have crossed my desk
A selection of feature-film and series projects I have written, doctored or consulted on:
Pick the level of intervention your script needs
From a clinical PDF diagnosis to a full page-one rewrite — each tier is built for a different stage of pain. All work is covered by a strict NDA.
Script Consultation
Clinical diagnosis: premise, structure, rhythm and characters.
$1,200
- Full read of your screenplay (up to 120 pages)
- Written diagnostic PDF (premise · structure · pacing · characters)
- Concrete creative options for every flagged problem
- 60-minute 1:1 video session to walk you through it
- Strict NDA before reading a single page
Script Rewrite
I rewrite the broken scenes, acts or genre punch-up — surgically.
$2,500
- Targeted rewrite of key scenes, an entire act or genre punch-up
- Structural surgery while preserving your original voice
- Two rounds of revisions on the delivered pages
- Tracked-changes script + clean version
- Strict NDA + optional ghostwriting clause
Page-One Script Writing
From your original premise to an export-ready feature screenplay.
$15,000
- Full feature screenplay written from your premise or concept
- Treatment → outline → first draft → revised draft
- International export-ready format and structure
- Strict NDA and full ghostwriting (your name on the credit)
- Three rounds of structural revisions included
A clear path from stuck to shootable
Brief & NDA
We sign the NDA, you tell me the pain point and send the material. Nothing is read without legal cover.
Clinical reading
I read the screenplay with surgical attention — premise, structure, rhythm, character. I mark every fault and its origin.
Written diagnosis
You receive a detailed PDF with the diagnosis and, for every flagged problem, multiple creative options to solve it.
1:1 session
60-minute video session to walk through everything, prioritize and align the next step (rewrite, draft, or you take it from here).
How I work — and how I don't
There are many readers in the market. Few work with method. This is the contract you can expect from me on every project:
Diagnostic first, opinion last
I don't say 'I didn't like it.' I name the exact problem and pinpoint the scene where it begins.
Always a path to the cure
I never deliver a problem without its possible fix. If 'act two is boring,' you'll get three concrete ways to fix it.
Objectivity without ego
My job is to make your original vision work — not to rewrite the movie I would have made.
Strict confidentiality
An NDA is signed before I read a single page. Your idea, your premise, your draft — yours and only yours.
Discipline of structure
Acts, beats, turning points, midpoint, climax. Structure is not creative jail — it's the spine that holds the emotion.
Respect for the writer
Notes are firm but never cruel. The goal is to elevate the script — not to humiliate the person who wrote it.
This service is a fit if…
✅ Right fit
- Writers, directors or producers with a finished draft that 'doesn't quite work'
- Production companies needing surgical rewriting of acts, scenes or character arcs
- First-time writers with a strong premise who need a professional pen to bring it to life
❌ Not a fit
- Those who only want validation — not a real diagnosis
- Anyone unwilling to sign an NDA or share the actual material
- Projects with no creative budget that expect free notes
Pick how deep you need me to go
All tiers include a strict NDA · Detailed written delivery · 1:1 conversation
Script Consultation
Clinical diagnosis: premise, structure, rhythm and characters.
$1,200
- Full read of your screenplay (up to 120 pages)
- Written diagnostic PDF (premise · structure · pacing · characters)
- Concrete creative options for every flagged problem
- 60-minute 1:1 video session to walk you through it
- Strict NDA before reading a single page
Script Rewrite
I rewrite the broken scenes, acts or genre punch-up — surgically.
$2,500
- Targeted rewrite of key scenes, an entire act or genre punch-up
- Structural surgery while preserving your original voice
- Two rounds of revisions on the delivered pages
- Tracked-changes script + clean version
- Strict NDA + optional ghostwriting clause
Page-One Script Writing
From your original premise to an export-ready feature screenplay.
$15,000
- Full feature screenplay written from your premise or concept
- Treatment → outline → first draft → revised draft
- International export-ready format and structure
- Strict NDA and full ghostwriting (your name on the credit)
- Three rounds of structural revisions included
- Secure payment
- Visa · MC · Apple Pay
- Strict NDA
- 1:1 session included
Professional commitment
Every diagnosis is delivered in writing with concrete creative options. If something is unclear after the 1:1 session, we revise it until it lands.
See refund & termsClear answers about working together
Do you sign an NDA before reading the script?
Yes. A strict NDA is signed before I open a single page. Your premise, your draft, your idea — it never leaves the working folder.
Which genres do you specialize in?
Drama, comedy, thriller and biographical/sports film. I work in features, series and short film for an international Spanish- and English-language market.
How long does the consultation take?
From signing to delivery, approximately 10 to 14 business days for a feature screenplay (up to 120 pages). Series and longer materials are quoted separately.
What if I need a full rewrite, not just notes?
That's the second tier — Script Rewrite ($2,500). I rewrite the scenes or acts we agree on after the diagnosis, with two rounds of revisions.
And if I only have an idea, no script?
Then we go in at the page-one writing tier ($15,000). We start from your premise, build the treatment, outline and full screenplay, with NDA and ghostwriting.
How do you deliver the work?
A detailed written PDF, plus a 60-minute 1:1 video session to walk through every note, prioritize and align next steps.
Do you take international clients?
Yes. I work in English and Spanish, with clients in Latin America, the U.S. and Europe. All communication is async + scheduled video calls.